Well yeah is just a bigger version of the actual logo, I just didnt want to include a lot of things inside the shield so that it would not be to many things to look at.
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not a lot of things..just make the diver and the grouper a bit bigger and perhaps overlap the state....I like the inclusion of the state...and the shield
I think it is a good starting point.
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ok thats a good idea, just remember that this is just what I drew up, our logo company is going to make everything look the right size and Im thinking a lot more artistic.
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i like it alot joe,
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ooohh, dan's improvement is nice...that even draws focus to the areas where we frequently dive...i like how it breaks the edges too...nice
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I think that is to scramble, it does not make sense. On the empty area I was going to tell them to make it look like the bottom of the ocean...Perhaps even a wreck....
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i agree, i like the original,, and i like the ocean background idea but not a wreck and not a cartoony looking ocean bottom, i think just like the computer graphic rippling water look would be cool,, but whatevver is clever..
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Here is the other option we were looking at. Feel free to make suggestions please.
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Brainstorm with both of them.....
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What you guys have to realize is that when it's time to put the logo on a business card or a shirt it's not going to appear to the eye the same as when you put a clear drawing on a large computer screen. Certain design fundamentals should be followed, the above logo is too spread out. I didn't mean to eliminate "South Florida" from the logo with my design. I just quickly did what to me is better grouping of the different elements that you wanted to incorporate.
In your design Adrian the state lines are completely unnecessary, they will not show in any application of the logo. A solid color state outline would be better. But then it will completely overpower the diver and fish and make them disappear. Anyways you only want south Florida. I'd feel bad for you guys if you invest in getting the log done and then realizing it doesn't look like what you thought in actual application. Just my :twocents:
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I totally understand what you are saying Dan. But these two designs are nothing but a base, the starting point of what will eventually evolve into the final design. We decided to put them up here so that you and everyone else could make suggestions, or even come up with something completely different yet relevant. I really want to see other people's creativity and ingenuity at work.
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How about something along these lines. I don't like the club name where it is. Maybe it can go inside the stripe.
I like the diver stripe and diver making an 'X' like the state flag.
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there is already the neptunes out west...just something to think about
Yeah, Long Beach Neptunes, but were a dying breed.:D
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i like this design, but i think its important (visually as well as in words) to like,,,, emphasize the south east florida part,,, like the first two do
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"South Florida" isn't enough emphasis?
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I like it keep them coming.
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i like the diver gliding, like in pantojas avatar rather than fining. A black grouper like the one in the logo above will never let you get close like the guy fining towards it. maybe it doesnt matter, just a thought. it might make the logo more realistic
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haha, alan adds input as a spearo, not a marketing guy....maybe we should listen since this is about spearos
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Yeah yeah.. I know Alan wishes a grouper would let him get that close
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